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My World Beyond This Window by 7THeaven My World Beyond This Window by 7THeaven
My World Beyond This Window


Many a night I pray for hope
From loneliness for me to cope
The silence I bared alone
To mistakes deemed to atone
My world beyond this window
Its hollow spaces it bestow
A glimpse of what I seek
The changes granted by a peek
Till you walked by the door
Gave me reason soar once more
Freed me from this dissonance
Bathed in sunset resonance

My world beyond this window
The glass shatters below
Escape me from these walls
Run through these battered halls
A moment lost in your eyes
A promise there won't be any lies

My world beyond this window
The sea of lights falls so low
May the stars in the sky hold us
the golden velvet to guide us
The dance of lights in the sky
I held my hands up high
drawing you a star-woven map
So you'll find your way back
To my arms with a sigh
In our canvas in the sky

(c) Auron Doxon to me
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AnimaDragonLibra Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Hello dear 7THHeaven! 

I will first tell you how your poem made me feel and then I will tell you about the light I see in your character. 

First of all, I almost made a beat to fit the poem. I guess that being said, it was written good enough to cause music to fill my mind which flows with the words. Such a wonderful ending, "In our canvas in the sky," indeed my friend the short few words alone create peace in a persons heart. It's a poem of enlightenment, while reading it, you can feel just how peace can be found that in this world, there is always love for you.

The poem writes a more clear story to the character you've presented here. This picture illustrates the wonder to be found in simplicity. What I see is the heart of your character, superficially he is enjoying a nice waffle and a hot beverage whilst enjoying his novel. In his heart, he does not need more than what is before him because he is filled with love. The scene plays this simple peacefulness out, I am sure only part of his concentration is in that book. Your poem is your rendition of his thoughts, indeed a mind and heart filled with love, is there a greater peace to be found?   
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DragonRam107 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
relaxing!
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fotiaxfurryxcatclan Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tea n' waffles
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7THeaven Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The best kind of breakfast XD
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fotiaxfurryxcatclan Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep! I don't like tea that much personally but I loooooove waffles XD
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Nikolai-Pokemon Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hey sis
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Sassywolfgirl Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
love it!!!
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kisamekaulitz Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
impressive shading
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MisterTurtle Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Sweater vest and collared shirt. Keepin' it classy, I see. :meow:
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Alex-Silver-Husky Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice picture, and the poem really speaks to me.
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